Monday, September 26, 2011

The Empire State Building




Background 
            The Empire State Building is a massive 102 story structure in New York City, receiving its name from New York State’s nickname “the empire state.” Built in 1930, the building is located at the crossroads of Fifth Avenue and West 34th Street. At the time it was built, the Empire State Building was the tallest construction in the world and it held that position until 1972. It now ranks as the 3rd tallest skyscraper the United States, to the Willis Tower and the Trump International Hotel and Tower, and the 15th in the world.
Construction
                        At the time it was being constructed, there was a sort of race going on to build the tallest building. First there was the Eiffel Tower in Paris, so American architects wanted to build a skyscraper of their own. Therefore, John Jakob Raskob hired William F. Lamb, the architect of the Empire State Building, to build a tower “as high as it can be before it falls over.” So, on March 17th 1930, 3,400 workers got together and started the construction of the Empire State Building. A ribbon was cut for a symbol of completion on May 1st, 1931 by the governor of New York’s grandchildren. 
            The Empire State building was built in just 1 year and 45 days! The building cost less to construct than expected, totaling at $40,948,900 when it was budgeted to be about $50,000,000. The Empire State building is currently undergoing renovations costing $550,000,000, much more that it cost to construct! The fact that it was the Great Depression helped lower the cost because labor fees were down and immigrants from Europe worked for very little pay.
            The Empire State Building was completed during the Great Depression; so much of the office space was not rented. Also, the location of the building was inconvenient for it was not near any transportation areas. Regardless of this, there was a lot of fanfare at the opening ceremony, and President Herbert Hoover did a lighting ceremony.
Suicides
            There have been about 30 suicides from the Empire State building because there are high gates built around the observation decks to prohibit accidents and there are guards as well. The most famous suicide story was that of Evelyn McHale jumped from the 86th floor observatory deck and landed on a limousine parked at the curb of the building. A photo of her was caught by a student just minutes after her death. This occurred on May 1st, 1947.
Role in popular culture
            The Empire State Building has played a role in many famous movies. From King Kong, Sleepless in Seattle, and Love Affair movie makers have involved the beauty and splendor of the building. In Percy Jackson and the Olympians: The Lighting Thief, the Empire State Building is the entrance to Olympus. Said to be on the “600th floor,” gods and “half-bloods” can enter Olympus by riding the elevator to the floor unknown to humans. The cover of the movie shows a spectacular view of New York in the background with the Empire State building or “Olympus” as well.
 
          The Empire State Building also played a role in King Kong. The climax of the movie has the gorilla climbing to the top of the building fighting planes. The image is iconic. Sometimes the photo is displayed at movie theaters on a wall full of photos of great American movies. Regardless of where the photo is seen, almost everyone can relate to King Kong as an iconic American film. The famous Empire State Building has a part of popular culture.   


I do
            The Empire State Building receives about 2 million visitors every year, and although there are no statistics to show how many proposals occur in the building, every year on Valentine’s Day couples are allowed to get married on top. On a regular basis, couples who wish to be married on one of the observation decks must send in an application and are chosen by originality and panache.


6 comments:

  1. Your writing style was very informative and followed the guidelines for an expository wiki-esc assignment. The order in which you stated your information was displayed in a way that your readers can read one paragraph and get all the knowledge they were looking for.

    Did you choose to have so many paragraphs to keep certain information by itself? Or did you decide what would be in every paragraph based on who was reading it, and what they would want to know?

    I noticed that the order you wrote your paragraphs in was from most important, to least. The crucial information was easily found, and when someone comes across this article, it seems more credible just based on the organization.

    Did you decide not to have paragraph titles because you found your writing already organized enough? My only problem was distinguishing if a paragraph was continuing the topic from the last or providing new information. I also thought that the note about suicides should have been added in after the paragraph about the amount of time and money it took to make, just because it was a less influential part that could be considered as unnecessary information.

    Overall, this reading was very well done and the only suggestion I have would be citing your sources to make it more credible and titling your paragraphs for sought out information to be more easily found.

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  2. Make sure to read over your text and make sure it is completely unbiased. There were parts that suggested that it wasn’t. Also check over the information you have chosen to include. Considering your audience, is this information necessary? There was also some information that you introduced and didn’t expand on, like the architect who you mention at the beginning of your writing. It seemed really awkward and out of place to suddenly mention him and then go back to talking about when it was built.
    Why did you choose to organize your writing this way? Perhaps it would be better to use titles for each topic of information you go into. Right now, your information seems kind of scrambled. Try to keep information about the same topic together. There were parts where one topic had been mixed with another one, and it makes the writing seem awkward.
    You included a picture of the Empire State Building at the end of your writing. Why did you choose to place it there? On sites like Wikipedia, a visual tends to be close to the top of the text, so people can see what they are reading about. Perhaps, it would have been better to have placed it at or near the beginning of your writing?
    I also noticed you chose to include your voice in your paper. It makes your writing sound less reliable. Perhaps if you removed your voice from the paper and provided a “works cited” section, you would seem more credible.

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  3. Hi, Joan.

    I would like you to reconsider the template you're using. Of course it is up to you, but I find your post difficult to read because of the background photo.

    D. Kopp

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  4. Hello, Joan.

    Like we discussed this morning in my office, take some time to play around with the layout of your blog to make it easy on the eyes.

    D. Kopp

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  5. Your post contains a lot of information about Empire state building and how it came into existence. I find the background story pretty interesting and it turned out to be really informative for me. It was really interesting to know that it was built in competition of the famous Eiffel tower in Paris. Also, the information about people committing suicide from this place is new to me. You have organized you post in a very well manner dividing the information into paragraphs starting from the most important one to the least one. I think you can make your post more interesting by adding a few more pictures of the Empire state building like a wedding going on there or the picture from a movie it came in. considering you audience, why did you choose to write about the Empire state building?
    Overall I really like the description about the building. It is well informative and you have done a great job in organizing the information; makes the reader want to read about it more. I think you have incorporated all the necessary details that a reader might want to know about the Empire state building.

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